Example Mode
An example represents a general group or an abstract concept or quality.
Purpose: to make the general specific and the abstract concrete.
AKA:
illustration, exemplification
Among most common
methods
Sample theses:
Generalizations about trends: “The
cable box could become the most useful machine in the house.”
Generalizations about events: “Some
members of the audience at The Rocky Horror Picture Show were stranger than anything in the movie.”
Generalizations about institutions: “A
mental hospital is no place for the mentally ill.”
Generalizations about behaviors: “The
personalities of parents are sometimes visited on their children.”
Generalizations about rituals: “A
funeral benefits the dead person’s family and friends.”
Ø Each forms the central assertion/ thesis, and so as many examples as
needed would then support it.
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Types of examples:
1. An
extended example (haven’t we seen this before?)
2. Multiple
examples
Readers should experience a pattern, not a list!
Organization:
Ø Arrange examples in order of increasing importance, interest, or complexity.
Ø The strongest, most detailed example provides a dramatic finish.
Ø Conclusion: might want to summarize by elaborating on the generalization of your thesis.
o (you might not even need a conclusion if your final example emphasizes
your point and provides a strong finish)
Questions to consider:
1. Are
all examples, or parts, obviously relevant to your generalization?
2. Are
the examples specific?
3. Do
the examples, or the parts, cover all the territory mapped out by your generalization?
Do your
examples support your generalization?